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		<title>Comment on Darwin as poet 2 by Skye Thompson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Skye Thompson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 May 2010 11:39:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi emballou,

I was at a talk by Brian Eno in Brighton on Sunday and he was talking about Darwin and I thought of you.

xSkye</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi emballou,</p>
<p>I was at a talk by Brian Eno in Brighton on Sunday and he was talking about Darwin and I thought of you.</p>
<p>xSkye</p>
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		<title>Comment on Darwin as poet 2 by Emily Ballou</title>
		<link>http://emilyballou.com/blog/?p=379&#038;cpage=1#comment-1277</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily Ballou</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 May 2010 20:28:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>
Well hello Year One Classes at Yarralumla Primary School,
How very nice to hear from you!

I think you have asked a very important question and I will try to answer it for you.

For me the story is about a boy who DISCOVERS he can fly, but didn&#039;t know in the beginning that he could fly.

I think if I called it &quot;The Boy Who Could Fly&quot; then you would expect a story about a boy who flies all of the time and you would be very sad at the end when he only flies once. You might ask your teacher, why did that girl write a story called &quot;The Boy Who Could Fly&quot; when he doesn&#039;t fly until the end? There&#039;s lots of worms and lots of socks and lots of scarves and VERY USEFUL THINGS, but not much flying!

But WHY did I call it ONE BLUE SOCK instead of another title, like THEO LEO, or &quot;THE BOY WHO ATE WORMS&quot;...?

I think I called it ONE BLUE SOCK because for me it is a story of a boy who is not quite like the other children. Most children would wear two blue socks, or no socks, but Theo Leo only wears one sock (and it&#039;s blue). This tells us that it a story about something out of the ordinary. The boy who wears One Blue Sock also eats worms and finally, in the end, discovers he can fly.

Also, I liked the sound of ONE BLUE SOCK. You might have noticed that SOUND is an important part of the story.

I know it&#039;s not a perfect answer, but I hope this helps to answer your question.

Maybe I should write a sequel called &quot;THE BOY WHO COULD FLY&quot;. What are some of the things that might happen to Theo Leo once he discovers he can fly?

And if you&#039;d ever like me to come to your school and read ONE BLUE SOCK to you, just let me know and maybe we could work something out...

I hope once in a while, all of you will try to see what it&#039;s like to wear only one blue sock (with your mother&#039;s permission of course!).

Love,

Emily</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well hello Year One Classes at Yarralumla Primary School,<br />
How very nice to hear from you!</p>
<p>I think you have asked a very important question and I will try to answer it for you.</p>
<p>For me the story is about a boy who DISCOVERS he can fly, but didn&#8217;t know in the beginning that he could fly.</p>
<p>I think if I called it &#8220;The Boy Who Could Fly&#8221; then you would expect a story about a boy who flies all of the time and you would be very sad at the end when he only flies once. You might ask your teacher, why did that girl write a story called &#8220;The Boy Who Could Fly&#8221; when he doesn&#8217;t fly until the end? There&#8217;s lots of worms and lots of socks and lots of scarves and VERY USEFUL THINGS, but not much flying!</p>
<p>But WHY did I call it ONE BLUE SOCK instead of another title, like THEO LEO, or &#8220;THE BOY WHO ATE WORMS&#8221;&#8230;?</p>
<p>I think I called it ONE BLUE SOCK because for me it is a story of a boy who is not quite like the other children. Most children would wear two blue socks, or no socks, but Theo Leo only wears one sock (and it&#8217;s blue). This tells us that it a story about something out of the ordinary. The boy who wears One Blue Sock also eats worms and finally, in the end, discovers he can fly.</p>
<p>Also, I liked the sound of ONE BLUE SOCK. You might have noticed that SOUND is an important part of the story.</p>
<p>I know it&#8217;s not a perfect answer, but I hope this helps to answer your question.</p>
<p>Maybe I should write a sequel called &#8220;THE BOY WHO COULD FLY&#8221;. What are some of the things that might happen to Theo Leo once he discovers he can fly?</p>
<p>And if you&#8217;d ever like me to come to your school and read ONE BLUE SOCK to you, just let me know and maybe we could work something out&#8230;</p>
<p>I hope once in a while, all of you will try to see what it&#8217;s like to wear only one blue sock (with your mother&#8217;s permission of course!).</p>
<p>Love,</p>
<p>Emily</p>
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		<title>Comment on Darwin as poet 2 by Jayne Murray</title>
		<link>http://emilyballou.com/blog/?p=379&#038;cpage=1#comment-1276</link>
		<dc:creator>Jayne Murray</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 May 2010 04:39:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Today in library I read you story &quot;One Blue Sock&quot; to the year one classed, who asked me why you had not called your book &quot;The Boy Who Could Fly&quot; and I promised that I would contact you and ask. They wanted to know why the Blur Sock was important when they thought the fact the boy could fly was more important. If you could help them in their quest that would be greatly appreciated.
Jayne Murray Teacher Librarian
Yarralumla Primary School  ACT</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today in library I read you story &#8220;One Blue Sock&#8221; to the year one classed, who asked me why you had not called your book &#8220;The Boy Who Could Fly&#8221; and I promised that I would contact you and ask. They wanted to know why the Blur Sock was important when they thought the fact the boy could fly was more important. If you could help them in their quest that would be greatly appreciated.<br />
Jayne Murray Teacher Librarian<br />
Yarralumla Primary School  ACT</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;While You Were Sleeping&#8221; by Anthony</title>
		<link>http://emilyballou.com/blog/?p=354&#038;cpage=1#comment-1175</link>
		<dc:creator>Anthony</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Feb 2010 08:25:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re most welcome, and thank-you for your time and consideration, sincerely.
I will definitely keep what you have said in mind throughout this project. I really appreciate it.

Thanks again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re most welcome, and thank-you for your time and consideration, sincerely.<br />
I will definitely keep what you have said in mind throughout this project. I really appreciate it.</p>
<p>Thanks again.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;While You Were Sleeping&#8221; by Emily Ballou</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emily Ballou</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 12:06:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Anthony, 

Thank you for your kind response to my poem on Bush Slam, and I&#039;m very sorry about the delay. As for you film and your questions about poetry, I&#039;m afraid there are no easy solutions to the writing of it! If you mean research in terms of how to write poetry, the rules of others might impede your own natural instincts. Poetry is something you just hear in your head, like a rhythm. Try to write as simply and as honestly as you can. Edit out what is unnecessary to the rhythm. Subtitles themselves are best simple, so poetry is an interesting idea for film. All you can do is listen and see what happens! Good luck.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Anthony, </p>
<p>Thank you for your kind response to my poem on Bush Slam, and I&#8217;m very sorry about the delay. As for you film and your questions about poetry, I&#8217;m afraid there are no easy solutions to the writing of it! If you mean research in terms of how to write poetry, the rules of others might impede your own natural instincts. Poetry is something you just hear in your head, like a rhythm. Try to write as simply and as honestly as you can. Edit out what is unnecessary to the rhythm. Subtitles themselves are best simple, so poetry is an interesting idea for film. All you can do is listen and see what happens! Good luck.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;While You Were Sleeping&#8221; by Anthony</title>
		<link>http://emilyballou.com/blog/?p=354&#038;cpage=1#comment-1132</link>
		<dc:creator>Anthony</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Feb 2010 01:38:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Emily,
I was fortunate enough to catch this show on ABC whilst I was on holiday. I think your poem was beautiful, and well worth the lost sleep! It was interesting to see the contrast in style between you and your competitor. I could go on, but I fear what I have to say may not be of much use anyway.

I could not help but respond to your work, both in terms of your approach to writing but also the way you present yourself. I admire your strength, clarity and especially focus. You just seem to have a certain balance that I can&#039;t quite explain. Due to this, I feel compelled to write to you, and be so bold as to ask for some advice.

I am currently planning to compose a short film celebrating three realms of Sydney - beach, bush and city - whilst at the same time being a poingant metaphor for the Human Condition. I am also hoping to splice the genre of film with poetry; with either poetry in subtitles, or as separate stills signifying something. However I am making very little headway in terms of my poetry. Perhaps research would be my best option, and this would further my ideas. Still, any and all words or advice from you I would immensely value; specifically in regards to this, or writing in general.

I have rambled a bit, but still, I hope it was not a chore to read.
Thank-you very much, and I completely understand if this is not a concern for you, and you do not reply. Please, reply through comment or if you prefer via E-mail; my address being the.ant.returns@gmail.com.

I look forward to hearing from you in the future, directly or otherwise.
- Anthony McMenamin</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emily,<br />
I was fortunate enough to catch this show on ABC whilst I was on holiday. I think your poem was beautiful, and well worth the lost sleep! It was interesting to see the contrast in style between you and your competitor. I could go on, but I fear what I have to say may not be of much use anyway.</p>
<p>I could not help but respond to your work, both in terms of your approach to writing but also the way you present yourself. I admire your strength, clarity and especially focus. You just seem to have a certain balance that I can&#8217;t quite explain. Due to this, I feel compelled to write to you, and be so bold as to ask for some advice.</p>
<p>I am currently planning to compose a short film celebrating three realms of Sydney &#8211; beach, bush and city &#8211; whilst at the same time being a poingant metaphor for the Human Condition. I am also hoping to splice the genre of film with poetry; with either poetry in subtitles, or as separate stills signifying something. However I am making very little headway in terms of my poetry. Perhaps research would be my best option, and this would further my ideas. Still, any and all words or advice from you I would immensely value; specifically in regards to this, or writing in general.</p>
<p>I have rambled a bit, but still, I hope it was not a chore to read.<br />
Thank-you very much, and I completely understand if this is not a concern for you, and you do not reply. Please, reply through comment or if you prefer via E-mail; my address being <a href="mailto:the.ant.returns@gmail.com">the.ant.returns@gmail.com</a>.</p>
<p>I look forward to hearing from you in the future, directly or otherwise.<br />
- Anthony McMenamin</p>
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		<title>Comment on Poets on ABC TV by Emily Ballou</title>
		<link>http://emilyballou.com/blog/?p=330&#038;cpage=1#comment-1130</link>
		<dc:creator>Emily Ballou</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Feb 2010 21:00:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for letting me know Penny; that&#039;s good to hear!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for letting me know Penny; that&#8217;s good to hear!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Poets on ABC TV by Penny Lane</title>
		<link>http://emilyballou.com/blog/?p=330&#038;cpage=1#comment-1129</link>
		<dc:creator>Penny Lane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Feb 2010 20:18:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The abc website does have the entire poem as a pdf file so I&#039;ve been reading that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The abc website does have the entire poem as a pdf file so I&#8217;ve been reading that.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Poets on ABC TV by Emily Ballou</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emily Ballou</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Feb 2010 10:24:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Penny, it&#039;s lovely to know people connect to it! It was a bit of a whirlwind, trying to write with such pressure and so quickly. But you are right, I try not to spend too long on poems, which doesn&#039;t mean I don&#039;t do several drafts but I like the drafts to come quickly, one after the other, over a few days and then I tend to leave it. Some poems I return to and, finding them incomplete, I attempt to fiddly, much to the poem&#039;s detriment. Somehow I can&#039;t get back in, whether it&#039;s finished or not, or could be better, it is finished for me. So, yes, if I&#039;d spent much longer on this poem, it might have gotten worse. By the way, the poem as read on the show was edited by a third, so I do think it&#039;s better than it was. I might post the entire poem, actually...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Penny, it&#8217;s lovely to know people connect to it! It was a bit of a whirlwind, trying to write with such pressure and so quickly. But you are right, I try not to spend too long on poems, which doesn&#8217;t mean I don&#8217;t do several drafts but I like the drafts to come quickly, one after the other, over a few days and then I tend to leave it. Some poems I return to and, finding them incomplete, I attempt to fiddly, much to the poem&#8217;s detriment. Somehow I can&#8217;t get back in, whether it&#8217;s finished or not, or could be better, it is finished for me. So, yes, if I&#8217;d spent much longer on this poem, it might have gotten worse. By the way, the poem as read on the show was edited by a third, so I do think it&#8217;s better than it was. I might post the entire poem, actually&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Poets on ABC TV by Penny Lane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Penny Lane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Feb 2010 21:36:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This poem, Emily, is wonderfully evocative. I read it often. I find all your poetry sparkling with freshness and clarity, as though it has come quickly to you - I guess it&#039;s because you have an exceptional skill at capturing or creating small moments. How long do you usually spend with a poem before you consider it completed? If you had taken longer over this poem, would it have been very different, do you think?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This poem, Emily, is wonderfully evocative. I read it often. I find all your poetry sparkling with freshness and clarity, as though it has come quickly to you &#8211; I guess it&#8217;s because you have an exceptional skill at capturing or creating small moments. How long do you usually spend with a poem before you consider it completed? If you had taken longer over this poem, would it have been very different, do you think?</p>
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